Headline above paragraph on my page
One or two sentences with some bullet points.
Make call to action more prominent on home page like on the blog post. Bullets or a single powerful sentence on calls-to-action.
Tell what’s in it for me.
Call to action text is generally too long. “Share your name and email address” is obvious.”
After “Want to become a web developer?” Less poop job, more smiley face. Use your computer and your brain to to make money from here or here.
Shorter text on all CTAs.
Model after Pat Flynn: https://www.smartpassiveincome.com/about/ Another example: https://www.smartpassiveincome.com/email-list-strategies/